Review Detail of asdfg12 in Game Of Thrones: Dragons Rule Again

If you can mentally correct the poor editing I would consider this a decent story. As a very basic rule 4 sentences should make 1 paragraph. If the author doesn't have access to an editor and English is a second language for them, I WOULD HIGHLY RECOMMEND THAT VERY BASIC RULE. Also quotation marks go at the beginning and end when a character speaks. Seriously Author just look at other stories on this site, they have paragraphs.