Early on (4chapters) but the grammar is horrible and he switches from 1st to 3rd person in a confusing mess. Characters are also misgendered all the time like they'll be referred to as he and she in the same paragraph or sentence. This stuff stops the potential story underneath from even having a chance at being good
Darlau
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LIKEYeah, I assume it is original as he uses the same type of idioms and grammar inside his comments more so some of his culture and language made it through(Spanish).
Athenisia:Most likely this is a translation from a chinese novel that author is trying to steal.