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Gabrielle_Johnson_6482
Gabrielle_Johnson_6482Lv141yr
2023-08-16 18:39

The writing style is so lush and descriptive and the FL is a string character

Reincarnation of the Totem

Cloudee77
4.7
1 Chs

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Cloudee77
Cloudee77Author

Glad you liked them.

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useduolingo
useduolingoLv11

Refreshing to get a story with a female Mc who doesn't rely on other people for strength. Love the concept, enjoying the characters, definitely recommend

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Cloudee77
Cloudee77Author

Hi، everyone whoever happens to pass by this story! I am the author here۔ Though it feels wierd reviewing your own work but I just wanted to set a kind of reminder for myself. Reading it for myself trying to view it partially is ofcourse very difficult, but let's just put it all away at once. yeah.The element that the beginning of my story carries is mystery. it's filled with co relations. How much I have done justice to that I Don't have any inkling. Another thing I am pursuing is sketching out emotions as much as possible. Not tears but simply letting emotions flow. Which many of my characters do freely, even though there are many constraints on them. I have planned a lot for this tale. I wish my future self have kept the pace going.finally please give this story a try and feel for yourself. this review was kind of for those who might pass by without seeing any reviews or rating. though it is still, authors, my own, but it just kind of feels like okay to do? On the other note, I like to hear any kind of constructive criticism, however harsh they maybe, very much. please feel free to give me ideas, or what I missed out.thankyou for being hereand welcome

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nekrom1
nekrom1Lv3

okay I should say this you don't get much female lead stories in this type of genre but man honestly what I thought that book would be was really different. I thought it would be the usual female lead fantasy storyline but what was displayed in those 3 chapters were very dark and tragic. and it was easy to understand, so i will keep this in library and see in future how it goes.

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UelUel
UelUelLv4

First of all, I did give the synopsis a read before jumping into the reading chapter 16/17/18. And honestly what I thought that book would be was really different. I thought it would be the usual female lead fantasy storyline but what was displayed in those 3 chapters were very dark and tragic. Anyway, the book is very well written, it was easy to follow and understand what the story is aiming to be portrayed. Although, chapter 16 got unnecessarily focused in describing the history of the place being burned. Then the next chapter jumped to the brother and sister being beaten on the road, and the next chapter moved to a much bigger plot of the story. Each chapter is really interesting and intriguing on their own but I think it would be better to have more connection between them. Overall it's a great book and those 3 chapters give me a visualization of the church crusade and witch hunt.

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Han_Sirang
Han_SirangLv1

I really liked the way the story has progressed so far. The MC is strong and since you don't often see that aspect being used often, it much more fun.

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Aidan_Grey
Aidan_GreyLv2

While the novel presents an intriguing premise and a well-paced plot, i think there are moments where the narrative could benefit from further exploration. Some aspects, such as the slice-of-life elements, could be further developed to enhance the overall depth and engagement of the story. I also think, a more finely-tuned balance between the dramatic moments and the quieter, introspective moments would provide a smoother reading experience. Overall a solid 10

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Uncle_Moon
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The story is very engaging, with a captivating plot. The initial chapter had me hooked from the start. Other than the long paragraphs, it is a very good story. I hope to read more."

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alu_sachi
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Good work, Author please update more chapters. This is worth spending my time on .[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]

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Husniya_S
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A captivating tale full of mysteries. The protagonist's life is such a remarkable experience, leaving a deep impact on the readers minds. A unique tale with a fresh perspective. Will definitely recommend to everyone.

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