I must say, this is one interesting tale. I found myself engaged in it, The characters are interesting and the story progresses well. Overall, it is worth the read. I really liked the way you focus on those characters, although at points, I was somewhat not expecting sudden shifts in POV's. It was confusing in the beginning in telling who was speaking, but I have also seen the improvement in later chapters . Nonetheless, I am giving you a 5, your quality of writing is not impacted by the shifting . Keep up your story.
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