It's an interesting fic and I'm enjoying reading it, but it's clearly the work of a novice author so I wouldn't recommend it to readers who are looking for a read from a more experienced author. I'm giving it 5 stars but a more honest rating would be 3.5 but I can clearly see it's a fic by a rookie actor who really put a lot of effort into writing something good. The story is interesting, I like the power of the protagonist and although having the love interest be an OC is not my preference I have to admit that the author has created an interesting character. The flaw of this fic is that the author is not very good at writing expressive scenes which ends up making the story a little dry and the development of the characters seems superficial, despite the author having really worked on developing them. Another flaw is that some events were too forced, the situation of the protagonist's hand in the first chapter was too forced, the first attack of villains that the MC faced was a bit forced and could have been much better developed, finally the last attack involving the teeth villain was extremely random and far too forced given that the location was supposed to be well defended. These fic problems clearly come from lack of experience rather than effort so and because I'm enjoying the story I'm giving it 5 stars.
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