Item: Tensura : Karna
Rating: 5
Author: Orion_Art

Orion_ArtLv126mth

2024-05-11 08:24

The story is very good and entertaining. The character interactions started out as a bit bland, but it got better overtime and they feel actually alive now and possessing personality that accurately represents their character. Although sometimes they can be a bit unsatisfying with abrupt cut offs, like with Milim after their first meeting. Other than that I'm glad this did not go the idiotic catch-em-all harem route, and the romance between MC and Shizue is very lovely and extremely refreshing. Power developments have also been quite interesting and unique in a way, considering MC doesn't have traditional cheat type abilities and is actually developing his strength over a period of time through training and fighting.

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Thanks author 😊 for you to create fanfiction tensura story with interesting premise, good romance and good explanation, I hope you have good health for continue this story 👍👍 again thanks for update 😊😁

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