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AdvocateSlime
AdvocateSlimeLv11yr
2023-10-12 02:22

Concept and idea of the fanfic is good, but the writing quality is not that good. Still acceptable for a Tensura Fanfic though. The romance felt rushed, and the pace is overall pretty fast. Also no updates. Pls understand that I have stated the negatives, there are also positives about this fic.

Tensura : Karna

Vedora_Tempest
4.6
27 Chs

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Vedora_Tempest
Vedora_TempestAuthor

Two years of being with each other and forming a companionship which would later transform into something more is not that Rushed.I don't know if my writing quality is good or not, just minutes before you, someone had reviewed that there is not a problem with that, so I don't know.. Different people, different opinions I guess..

1yr
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Reader_Tet
Reader_TetLv2

Quite good for now, as of present, it has 3 chapters and it was quite good, grammar is also great. If the author continues this, definitely recommend.

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Red_Ghosty
Red_GhostyLv11

the idea is good but the interactions are bland and non descriptive.

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nariaki_kinugasa
nariaki_kinugasaLv1

Thanks author 😊 for you to create fanfiction tensura story with interesting premise, good romance and good explanation, I hope you have good health for continue this story 👍👍 again thanks for update 😊😁

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Lord_Rings
Lord_RingsLv4

I like the story hope make children for mc

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MiqueIIa
MiqueIIaLv1

This is amazing! Description of the character of the characters, the staging of battles, the plot, everything is at the highest level! This is definitely 5/5! I'm not sure yet how things will be with Canon and Rimuru, given that the fate of Rimuru and its development depended on Shizue's death, but keep it up, Author! I'm looking forward to the sequel.[img=update][img=recommend]

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Divinenature
DivinenatureLv14

Keep up the good work. Story is quite good just little bit fast pace. Grammar is in good conditions. Maybe story needs time skip to when original story starts. Maybe you can do more research on Astras because on power scale the normal astra are more power full than what you have shown in story. Because different astra has diff power some might be single kill some might be area kill astra for example. brahmastra is power full enough to destroy whole world. And Vasavi skati is a single kill astra.

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BaaSheep123
BaaSheep123Lv5

Very enjoyable fanfic with good characters and a cheesy and fluffy romance between Shizue and MC. Will be looking forward to reading more.

1yr
Orion_Art
Orion_ArtLv12

Reveal spoiler

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KangTL
KangTLLv1

Grammar : Good - Five StarPlot Story : Good - Five StarCharacter Design : Good - Five StarUpdate : Good - Five StarWorld background : Good - Five Star-Everything Is good, I give this novel five star and don't forget to read my novel to, thank you.

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