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AdvocateSlime
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2023-10-12 02:22

Concept and idea of the fanfic is good, but the writing quality is not that good. Still acceptable for a Tensura Fanfic though. The romance felt rushed, and the pace is overall pretty fast. Also no updates. Pls understand that I have stated the negatives, there are also positives about this fic.

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Two years of being with each other and forming a companionship which would later transform into something more is not that Rushed.I don't know if my writing quality is good or not, just minutes before you, someone had reviewed that there is not a problem with that, so I don't know.. Different people, different opinions I guess..

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