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2024-08-10 01:35

Good story...we can read without getting bored but still in middle part it's annoying that many chapters cover same thing about their daily activities... leaving it aside there are many characters without being one dimensional and having a bit of depth and I found no character in this novel which feels flat. This is a good story with many small side plot lines with supporting characters along with main plot lines with our ML's family which have large room for further progress. I hope author doesn't abruptly complete the story by leaving some characters ending pending and wish that author ties up all loose ends. I am really liking the story and hope the relationship between main characters progress.[img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Thank you for your wonderful review, Dazzle! >ᴗ< I will do my best to deliver a complete ( no rushing ) ending and progress our protagonist couple's relationship.

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Author-nim, HOW DARE YOU!!! How dare you leave me asking for more even after 200 plus chapters 😭😭😭 Some of my top fave Chinese novels are Bai Fumei, Farm, Get Wealthy & Raise Cubs and Married to a Disabled Man in the 70s so when I stumbled upon this treasure with a similar theme as the ones mentioned above, I’m serious when I say I wanted to shed tears of joy! This novel is just total chef’s kiss! ML is a devoted, clingy, protective husband and FL is a caring wife who enjoys showering him with love 🥰 But what made me really fall in love with the story is that the MCs are not the only ones who are smart and likable unlike some novels that has supporting characters who are either braindead or bland. The author really did a great job creating other characters that are endearing and easy to root for besides the main leads. My fave character actually is that one sister-in-law with an unfiltered mouth and an expert at face slapping lmaoooo This novel doesn’t lack shameless jumping clown villains BUT they are just unimportant passersbys anyway and the “villains” that are willing to change for the better were given a redemption arc and character development. LOVE 👏🏻 IT 👏🏻 I honest to goodness thought this was a translation written by a Chinese author so imagine my surprise Pikachu face when the author replied to each and every one of my comments hahaha! Author-nim, your writing style is truly perfect for me. Perfect grammar, perfect spelling, no chapter fillers - only thing that’s not perfect is you not posting at least 10 chapters a day HAHAHAHA 😂✌🏻 You gained another fan in me Author-nim 🙇🏻‍♀️

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