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Goddess_99
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2023-11-11 13:23

This is really good, I really like the story line and its development does anybody have the raw???

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Fleeting_Dawn
Fleeting_DawnAuthor

Thank you for your review. This is my original story so there is no raw. Thank you for reading! :D

ColorfulAutumnWind
ColorfulAutumnWindLv14

This is an original work by the author Fleeting_Dawn.

bunhongsaeg
bunhongsaegLv3

Hahaha! The novel is so good and true to the background world development people think is a translated novel. 😅

Fleeting_Dawn
Fleeting_DawnAuthor

I'm flattered by the misunderstanding. xD I'll work hard to increase my writing skills. :D

bunhongsaeg:Hahaha! The novel is so good and true to the background world development people think is a translated novel. 😅
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Author-nim, HOW DARE YOU!!! How dare you leave me asking for more even after 200 plus chapters 😭😭😭 Some of my top fave Chinese novels are Bai Fumei, Farm, Get Wealthy & Raise Cubs and Married to a Disabled Man in the 70s so when I stumbled upon this treasure with a similar theme as the ones mentioned above, I’m serious when I say I wanted to shed tears of joy! This novel is just total chef’s kiss! ML is a devoted, clingy, protective husband and FL is a caring wife who enjoys showering him with love 🥰 But what made me really fall in love with the story is that the MCs are not the only ones who are smart and likable unlike some novels that has supporting characters who are either braindead or bland. The author really did a great job creating other characters that are endearing and easy to root for besides the main leads. My fave character actually is that one sister-in-law with an unfiltered mouth and an expert at face slapping lmaoooo This novel doesn’t lack shameless jumping clown villains BUT they are just unimportant passersbys anyway and the “villains” that are willing to change for the better were given a redemption arc and character development. LOVE 👏🏻 IT 👏🏻 I honest to goodness thought this was a translation written by a Chinese author so imagine my surprise Pikachu face when the author replied to each and every one of my comments hahaha! Author-nim, your writing style is truly perfect for me. Perfect grammar, perfect spelling, no chapter fillers - only thing that’s not perfect is you not posting at least 10 chapters a day HAHAHAHA 😂✌🏻 You gained another fan in me Author-nim 🙇🏻‍♀️

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