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2023-11-20 19:06

Great story so far. I binge read it to the current chapter and so far it's very promising. There are the occasional grammar errors but nothing substantial that will mess up your read. Ultimately it's a smooth read and everything flows quite well. The story so far looks good but I think some people might take issue with the MC who has memories from his prior life and his new life who can at times appear like a dunse. However I can easily see how that's beginning to change. The best part of this novel so far for me has to be the design of the characters and how they interact. The author did a brilliant job on that part. The novel is still at the beginning so not much has been on world background aside from a few things. Overall great novel so far. Highly recommend. I hope you continue with it author and best of luck.

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Thanks for the encouragement馃檪

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will he go after his daughter's, I want know just. like it mention in synonym.

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