Item: Reborn: My Two Systems at War
Rating: 5
Author: Skyfail

SkyfailLv151yr

2023-09-14 04:03

I like it so far. Which is a bit surprising since I usually don't like system novels that much. I wouldn't mind a universal system where everyone in the world had access to it but after reading I hate System the idea of these kinf of systems is just weird. However this concept of two systems at odds with each other in the same body as well as the Yuri tag have convinced me to read it. Anyways so far I like it. The dimension hopping makes it a little bit more unique and better. I just hope that not all of her power will come from the system. Hope she will learn some runes or potioneering properly through books or whatnot and not "system learn that for me". All it would take would be a system to have malicious agendas and she would lose all her capabilities. Same if one of the systems actually manages to overpower the other one. She would just instantly lose half of her power. That's my issue with system novels. It may be convenient but at the end its just borrowed power which also doesn't fit with her goal of freedom if she would be above everyone else but slave to the system. Well that was a lot of complaining. At the moment I like it and will just enjoy it. If by some point I don't like the direction its headed I guess I'll just drop it which would be a real shame.

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