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2023-07-20 05:48

Read the old version curious to see what changes are made as the story is already pretty goodPls no drop

Reborn: My Two Systems at War

AnonymUser
4.5
131 Chs

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AnonymUser
AnonymUserAuthor

For now only small, but from the next one there should be more changes as I inserted one extra chapter. Also, the one-year time-skip will be filled now as it was too sudden and a mistake.

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AnonymUser
AnonymUserAuthor

Good morning, I am a super ultra duper hacker who hacked the author's account only to give this five stars as I love this. Nope, I am not the author... trust me.

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Bing_B0ng
Bing_B0ngLv5

Reveal spoiler

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aldesse
aldesseLv15

For what we have seen so far and what the autor did with Vesuvius we will have a journey of a moraly questionable "young" girl / space assassin throught magic and space.I am really hyped by the quality of the 15 first chapter and wich for such quality to be preserve even if it mean less chapter.(please make her way more human/relatable than what you did with Vesuvius. It is cool to see a dragon mind take over a human mind but i really would like to see the same level of caracter for a human push throught the fire of live 🙏)

1yr
Rakshahsa
RakshahsaLv4

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FurryCatUwU
FurryCatUwULv12

A unique novel with a fun twist on your stereotypical system; despite it juggling so many different concepts, I think this novel does a good job keeping the story fun and engaging!🐱

1yr
Usiel
UsielLv13

MC is the pet of some noble. Only in the first chapters she shows some backbone, rest of the story she is either controlled or a pet. Her wisdom is in minus score, even thou she is having her second life the sheer stupidity of her decisions and general timidness when she sees any person with authority is disgusting. This is some cuck mc story which was extremely hard even to skim. If possible i would've given minus score.

1yr
Reiya9
Reiya9Lv4

What types of worlds will she travel? Original worlds or more fictional worlds we have as entertainment here? And what worlds has she traveled to already? Just asking before I get invested in this story

1yr
Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

This is a review of the story until chapter 22. I'm really enjoying reading it, it's an interesting novel and it's totally worth reading, however it's not a masterpiece so don't read it hoping to find the next LOM or library of heaven's path, just a good and interesting novel. The reason I don't give it 5 stars is that Chapter 1 was very confusing and often the protagonist is in one scenario and suddenly jumps to another. This doesn't make the story confusing, but without even a transition paragraph between the scenarios, the immersion is broken and this harms the reading experience. If you want an example of what I'm talking about, read the end of chapter 21 and the beginning of 22. We don't even have the protagonist getting up and saying "I'm going" before changing scenes. All we have is someone saying "something is happening that might interest you", the chapter ends and in the next the protagonist is already on the street crossing the crowd. Another small problem is that in the beginning, during the escape the protagonist seems to be portrayed as a child by the other characters but shortly after she is being narrated as an slender woman, not even an slender young woman but an slender woman right after another bad transition, which makes everything worse. These are the only problems that I noticed and they are details, but they bothered me a lot and that's why I'm not giving it 5 stars.

1yr
NStar
NStarLv15

For now, I can say with sincerity that this is one the best book that I have read! So don’t hesitate to read it to, you will only have a good time.

1yr
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