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Lull_321
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2023-10-27 02:09

Honestly this is good, very good. But I just got a VERY STRONG feeling that this is TRANSLATED, that's why I give it 3 star. Some name got mixed, Kabuto written as Pharmacist Dou which is mostly found in chinese translated novel. If this is translation please at least give the source. Note: If this really translated then your translation is very good, thank you 👍

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Bleam
BleamAuthor

oh where?

Bleam
BleamAuthor

what chapter

Lull_321
Lull_321Lv3

Chapter 50, for pharmacist dou. And my bad, what I mean mixed up is the pronouns, like he she, though there's very few

Bleam:what chapter
Lord_Azathoth
Lord_AzathothLv4

Review doesn't matter alright? Just tell the translator where the mistake is and he would correct it if he find it convenient.

Clay_Champion
Clay_ChampionLv5

won't do it. The paragraph comments, once they exceed a certain number, the authors stop reading them to fix issues...

Lord_Azathoth:Review doesn't matter alright? Just tell the translator where the mistake is and he would correct it if he find it convenient.
luckyroo
luckyrooLv4

why didn't you give a shout-out to the original author in the description?

Bleam:oh where?
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