A fun story so far. I definitely like the starter choice. My only problem so far is that the author made the alpha gene affect the appearance of a pokemon, rather than just their size. Oh and the first half of the first chapter, where the MCs backstory is explained, feels pretty unnecessary. I'd advise just skipping that part.
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LIKEBonAurevoir:Yeah, that firsthand of the chap was mainly just a reference to my previous story. It can just get skipped.