Review Detail of Nethersteel in Nexus: I Can't Make Portals?!
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Stay consistent Mr. Author! Do not flatter to the treacherous feinds - The haters. I will support you in your journey, donating every stone I possess! I shall follow you in this horrendous journey full of vile haters, critical comments, hateful reviews and more!Pin me... If you have the heart to let me follow on this adventure full of thrill and action!
Nexus: I Can't Make Portals?!
Xolu
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I like the grammar and your way with words, and attention to detail. Adding on the fact that the characters don't feel like robots is relieving, because in some novels it does. And I also like the timeline you chose, not too futuristic or too much in the past, setting countless ways to world-build and use your creativity. Although much is not still revealed about the timeline, I have a gut feeling you chose it wisely. And I like Libert's cowardly personality at the start, making room for character development! (My fav part) So the story will be thrilling and fun to read as I see Libert grow from a coward to a darefull and bold character, and forge himself into a steel-willed avenger to embark on a journey full of doubts, adversaries and much more!
Xolu:Do you like my novel...if so, what do you like about it?
Nethersteel:I like the grammar and your way with words, and attention to detail. Adding on the fact that the characters don't feel like robots is relieving, because in some novels it does. And I also like the timeline you chose, not too futuristic or too much in the past, setting countless ways to world-build and use your creativity. Although much is not still revealed about the timeline, I have a gut feeling you chose it wisely. And I like Libert's cowardly personality at the start, making room for character development! (My fav part) So the story will be thrilling and fun to read as I see Libert grow from a coward to a darefull and bold character, and forge himself into a steel-willed avenger to embark on a journey full of doubts, adversaries and much more!
Hmm, lemme see... Nothing really. I did not find anything I dislike at the moment, maybe in the future chapters may come scenarios when I will.
Xolu:What do you not like