Nethersteel
An average guy who likes Anti-hero/evil protags.
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Nethersteel9mthReplied to BubbleGodI've only read about 30 chapter so I forgot 😅
"I'll go with the Infernal Breathing." Liam said after a short pause.- Nethersteel9mthReplied to CRUZENReacting with lightning reflexes, Naruto's body flickered as he attempted to elude the menacing figure, but Kakashi was even faster. He snatched all three members of the team and moved with extraordinary agility, chanting a spell that unveiled a concealed entrance. The squad darted through the narrow opening just as the enormous door came crashing down, sealing their path with finality.
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That one guy:
The next era saw the rise of the so-called 'Neuron Pods', and they are currently the next-gen of pods on the market, allowing for absolute immersion. It was so perfect that 99/100 people wouldn't even realize they were inside virtual reality even after spending a day inside… - Nethersteel9mthCommented
Wavy?
This paragraph has been deleted. - Nethersteel9mthReplied to BubbleGod
Who is shang and abaddon?
"I'll go with the Infernal Breathing." Liam said after a short pause. - Nethersteel9mthCommented
I hate 'various colours'
Within the underground were countless shops and other businesses, except they weren't normal by any means. From what Liam could see, some displayed weapons which didn't look to be made from traditional metals, glimmering various colors. - Nethersteel9mthReplied to Nike13K
The best thing about that novel for me was the names... They were English!!
'This center of power is one of three, with the other being the Body and Sea of Consciousness. However, these organs require 'Techniques' to awaken.' - Nethersteel9mthReplied to Mike_Sullouski_21However, Liam could already speak her tongue, and its writings were quite similar to the English language.
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The Dao approves
'In this world… a single human can actually fight against a beast like that and win? I must find out more.' - Nethersteel9mthReplied to CRUZENCh 30 Chapter | XXX |
- Nethersteel9mthReplied to _Spectator_Ch 30 Chapter | XXX |
- Nethersteel9mthCommentedCh 5 Mother: Anxious
- Nethersteel9mthReplied to Xolu
I like the grammar and your way with words, and attention to detail. Adding on the fact that the characters don't feel like robots is relieving, because in some novels it does. And I also like the timeline you chose, not too futuristic or too much in the past, setting countless ways to world-build and use your creativity. Although much is not still revealed about the timeline, I have a gut feeling you chose it wisely. And I like Libert's cowardly personality at the start, making room for character development! (My fav part) So the story will be thrilling and fun to read as I see Libert grow from a coward to a darefull and bold character, and forge himself into a steel-willed avenger to embark on a journey full of doubts, adversaries and much more!
- Nethersteel9mthCommented"Okay, your test will begin in 3… 2… 1…" the lady said, then left the room.
- Nethersteel9mthCommentedThe heftiest question that was alarming Libert, was how. How was a mundane, an individual who couldn't even form a portal, supposed to pass an examination that was supposed to test for portal-warping affinity?
- Nethersteel9mthCommented"W-why d-don't we run?" Libert asked rigidly.
- Nethersteel9mthCommented"…Your lying!" the slurred accent became amplified with a tone of outrage. Libert felt the crocodile-like texture of his father's hands grab his neck, the drunk father then followed the action by relentlessly slamming his son's skull into the refrigerator.
- Nethersteel9mthCommentedWith an expanded ambition to solve the mystery, Libert dove further into his investigation. The answer-hungry teenager scoured through his massive collection of books, while his parents never demonstrated love towards him, they did force him to study for the majority of his life.