Review Detail of Type_Moon in Re:Zero/Mordred Pendragon. King of Lugnica (Re:Zero/Fate fanfiction)
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The quality of the writing is better than most stories on here. No real grammar problems either. Only thing I can say is that Subaru does not feel needed. The author made it clear that this was the MC story and not following Subaru around. But the author still added Subaru yet took away his Return By Death. People who watched the Anime or read the LN knows that if Subaru doesn't have the ability then that means Satella does not love him, it makes no sense for him to be summoned when the MC has the ability. The MC is also the one who is interacting with Emilia instead so it kind of defeats the purpose of even having him around since we already have a MC who has RbD who also is interacting with the characters instead of Subaru. The author hasn't really given a reason for why he is around besides "he will be important" but this ignores all of his relevancy was taken from him and by a plot standpoint the MC should be the relevant one because of the above.
Re:Zero/Mordred Pendragon. King of Lugnica (Re:Zero/Fate fanfiction)
Jaed21
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LIKEWhat nonsense? You gave no examples except "It wasn't Satella! It could have been Pandora or Flugel!" then when asked to explain why Subaru is in the fic you clam up or derail talking about how you hate the idea of Subaru being the protag. You still haven't explained why the first ending is going on about descripting Subaru hair and eyes and how the person implied to be Satella misses those "times" before and how she sees him off in the same way he goes to the shadow garden when he dies is not a clue, or how she talks about his past and what he did for her in the Witch's Tea party, or how Shaula calls him the Sage, or how the anime shows a hand that looks like the ones Satella makes is what is reaching for him that then causes the distortions. There is more evidence for her being the summoner than for all the other people you mention from the simple fact that she is the only one that showed up. You could say you wanted to go with a different Idea which would have been it. But instead you just pretended like none of that happened and instead went on about how everyone else is wrong and you're right without giving any proof.
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