Review Detail of Type_Moon in Re:Zero/Mordred Pendragon. King of Lugnica (Re:Zero/Fate fanfiction)

The quality of the writing is better than most stories on here. No real grammar problems either. Only thing I can say is that Subaru does not feel needed. The author made it clear that this was the MC story and not following Subaru around. But the author still added Subaru yet took away his Return By Death. People who watched the Anime or read the LN knows that if Subaru doesn't have the ability then that means Satella does not love him, it makes no sense for him to be summoned when the MC has the ability. The MC is also the one who is interacting with Emilia instead so it kind of defeats the purpose of even having him around since we already have a MC who has RbD who also is interacting with the characters instead of Subaru. The author hasn't really given a reason for why he is around besides "he will be important" but this ignores all of his relevancy was taken from him and by a plot standpoint the MC should be the relevant one because of the above.