Review Detail of Type_Moon in Re:Zero/Mordred Pendragon. King of Lugnica (Re:Zero/Fate fanfiction)
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The quality of the writing is better than most stories on here. No real grammar problems either. Only thing I can say is that Subaru does not feel needed. The author made it clear that this was the MC story and not following Subaru around. But the author still added Subaru yet took away his Return By Death. People who watched the Anime or read the LN knows that if Subaru doesn't have the ability then that means Satella does not love him, it makes no sense for him to be summoned when the MC has the ability. The MC is also the one who is interacting with Emilia instead so it kind of defeats the purpose of even having him around since we already have a MC who has RbD who also is interacting with the characters instead of Subaru. The author hasn't really given a reason for why he is around besides "he will be important" but this ignores all of his relevancy was taken from him and by a plot standpoint the MC should be the relevant one because of the above.
Re:Zero/Mordred Pendragon. King of Lugnica (Re:Zero/Fate fanfiction)
Jaed21
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LIKEI did not see this second post but here is my comment on this. You're misinterpreting what people are complaining about. No one wants Subaru to be Mordred bitch. People are asking why you decided to have the MC steal the few advantages Subaru has then keep him around while seemingly also swooping in for his love interest. Plenty of people make Re zero SI, when they don't want the MC following Subaru around they just don't add him to the story. There is even several SI of people being Fate characters sent to Re Zero. Every single one of those but one is just like this Story where the SI is in the body of a Saberface with Subaru around. None of them have the SI being Subaru sidekick, nearly all of them have the SI being a candidate like yours. What they do is just have the SI leave and do their own thing with either Reinhard or whoever will be in there camp. The only one that had the SI join Emilia was the one where they replaced Subaru entirely with Arthur proto body and RBD. The fact that you kept Subaru but did this is why people keep asking since there was no reason to do it but fuck over a character for some reason.
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