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Review Detail of Type_Moon in Re:Zero/Mordred Pendragon. King of Lugnica (Re:Zero/Fate fanfiction)

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The quality of the writing is better than most stories on here. No real grammar problems either. Only thing I can say is that Subaru does not feel needed. The author made it clear that this was the MC story and not following Subaru around. But the author still added Subaru yet took away his Return By Death. People who watched the Anime or read the LN knows that if Subaru doesn't have the ability then that means Satella does not love him, it makes no sense for him to be summoned when the MC has the ability. The MC is also the one who is interacting with Emilia instead so it kind of defeats the purpose of even having him around since we already have a MC who has RbD who also is interacting with the characters instead of Subaru. The author hasn't really given a reason for why he is around besides "he will be important" but this ignores all of his relevancy was taken from him and by a plot standpoint the MC should be the relevant one because of the above.

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Re:Zero/Mordred Pendragon. King of Lugnica (Re:Zero/Fate fanfiction)

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What are you talking about no reason or no argument? We know from Echidna and Satella both being the one to update his power and their talk in the Tea party that the power is hers. We know a shadow hand is what reached for him just going by anime, the highest most likely people to summon him is Witch of Envy, Satella (to kill her like she asked) or Pandora. You say there is no reason to assume it was Satella but then say you're not saying she didn't do it. Subaru having knowledge on Celestial Bodies is mostly worthless and either could have been given to the MC or not needed. It's the same with Japanese. It barely ever comes up as plot points besides to make Subaru think about the mystery of everything. Which isn't needed since the MC knows the story. The idea that anyone else summoned should take Subaru ability and "protag status" doesn't make sense. Even if you ignore the question of who summoned him, we know for a fact his ability came from Satella and that she gave it to him. So even if you claim Satella didn't summon Subaru that does not mean he should suddenly lose the ability. We know she goes out of her way to update his checkpoints to make sure he doesn't get into a endless death loop. Someone being transmigrated does not mean Subaru loses his abilities. Take Al, literally has his own Authority. If I would make an example imagine someone wrote a Rising of the shield hero SI where the OC is the new shield hero. But Naofumi is still summoned with no shield, he is still thrown out on the streets, he doesn't get Raphtalia because the SI took her, and he doesn't join a party. Then the author says he kept Naofumi because he needed someone who can cook. You see how it doesn't make sense?

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