Well written with the rare very minor spelling/grammatical mistakes. World building is great with the author setting up a more believable and what I think would be a more realistic view of how wild pokemon would really behave off route. Good character development so far as well (note: I am only on Chapter 17 of 20 right as of writing this). I only rated the “Updating Stability” a 3/5 because I haven’t seen an update since I started reading this story…..although that’s most likely more due to the fact that my reading speed far exceeds an authors upload speed so take that with a grain of salt…my reading speed is fast enough that whenever I find a story that piques my interest, I can usually start and finish reading it within a few days at most so the authors usually dont have the time to make a new chapter before I’m finished reading what’s already been uploaded (which is why I normally wait for multiple chapters of my favorite stories to be uploaded before reading them all in one go). Everything else though is a 5/5, rating wise. Overall, great story with believable world and characters with distinct, unique personalities so far!
Liked by 4 people
LIKE
No replies. Be the first!
