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FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv41yr
2023-12-24 14:15

4/3/4/4/3 Story is cool but it kinda drops the ball after his third evolution and he turns from cool devouring wolf to weird hyperactive child. Then you factor in the whole religion and faith points, the system no longer doing teleporting and making the MC do it via faith points just paints a bad direction, in my opinion. Plus the weird overlord alien woman who is possibly the love interest but possibly not since apparently MC lost his gender so who knows what the author is doing on that front. All in all neat story just not going in a favorable direction for me to keep reading

The Devouring Menace | Omni-realities

OneArmedImmortal
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OneArmedImmortal
OneArmedImmortalAuthor

This is a fast paced junk food with humor, lots of inner nerdiness before I transition to THIRD pov, a 'little' bit of unrealistic science😵, evolution journey of a gray wolf into something much more... Honestly, this is something I wrote without much thinking(massive SI at some points).Five star for even trying the Non-human route... I think next I should try YURI or gender bender🤭

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MellyK9
MellyK9Lv15

I didn't enjoy it much for a couple of reasons, but I can definitely understand if others like it. For me, the book isn't really serious enough. It spends too much time on jokes and tapping on the 4th wall. Another thing is the whole wolf best friend thing that just felt like it was out of nowhere. First, he is a human who is nihilistic and dislikes the world, and then suddenly, he is a wolf willing to befriend another wolf. And the ROB wannabe was also annoying for me, but again, the book is decent, just not my cup of tea.

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Joker333
Joker333Lv3

Realy good . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

11mth
OneshotMaco
OneshotMacoLv4

So far it's been amazing and I've been having a good time reading this. I have enjoyed this LN so far and can't wait for more. There have been many funny bits and some that are iffy to say the least. From what iIhave seen so far the author will take this LN to be a great one with I hope at least 125 chapter 🙇‍♂️.

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MarkOfLife
MarkOfLifeLv5

Looking forward to the Next chapter. First time to read a something about Rampage Movies. Keep it up. I'll be waiting for the next chapter................

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ArchProgenitor
ArchProgenitorLv14

amazing.................................

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Creativityiskey
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This is a amazing book for only having a couple chapters I see a lot of things for this book!!!!

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Deathly_Rose
Deathly_RoseLv4

God this was a blast from the past for me thanks a lot for writing this

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Eins_olgon
Eins_olgonLv1

Лялял лляляллял ляяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяяя. Что то я пишу да сума схожу и вдоль и вперёд меня ведёт безумный рой.

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Bastante interessante. Mal posso esperar para começar a ler 😃__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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