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Mithren
MithrenLv121yr
2023-08-27 11:18

The first chapter had me bored. Info dumping with the MC appearing very stuck up. No real buildup. Plot armor etc. I'm not interested in this story.

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KaasCrane
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story quality 1-2 / 5 An appetizing livestream novel with sci-fi elements. Enjoyed despite its flaws. Doubt any plot twists, betrayals, or other heart-tugging scenarios to occur. Got this grand plan going, but livestream drags it out. He's bathing in the spotlight of extravagance, but what about that ambition of his? We jump right in as to who exactly our main protagonist really is---a Mary Sue, "Xiao Yuyao---a man that was known to be the best of the best" freak from a futuristic age who's supposedly a top scientist for this really big empire. You quickly reaffirm that there are no scandal shenanigans, but we get livestreams...displaying black technology. How fun! You bet there'd be netizens of the internet spamming rockets and singing praises, but wait, the government's here to crash the party. However, the protagonist's got it cool, because---you see, this is actually a part of an audacious marketing ploy for his future company! There's considerable focus on the grandiose and reactions, and little descriptions that show the absolute bombshell on the political and socioeconomical landscape if a literal incarnation of super-duper technology were to appear. There shouldn't be expectations of back-and-forth threats coming from all directions; no flesh-burning high-stakes gambles in play due to his "advanced AI" capable of analyzing and preventing all risks; no moral dilemma in ruining countless lives for his business empire's sake; and no expert characterization on the matter of anyone because you bet it's all about his cool inventions and the reactions it receives. But hey! There were peaks in conflict, but no satisfying resolution. Simply because of this, it's better than "most" novels...here...on trial read.

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