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Damian_PriceLv121yr
2023-09-25 10:52

I like the story so far i just wished the main character had more interactions with intelligent mech and maybe did not stay earth based and moved towards space to find out what caused the cyber apocalypse. even throw in a few space monsters or other races. it's just a thought I wanted to share with the author.

Mech Awakening: I Awakened an Aircraft Carrier!

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Emperors_PenLv14

A very good story but spoilt by the fact that there is too much racism.

1yr
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Lover1997Lv15

the title should be Cybertron: the origin.

1yr
4
SinfuLeeCerebralLv15

really good story idea, to bad the racism is so disturbing. like cruel characters are whatever, but explicit racism is just disgusting.

1yr
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SlothiticusLv14

This is really bad. The plot is illogical and will likely have huge gaps or inconsistencies in its world development as it progresses. The nationalism is overbearing to an extreme degree.

1yr
2
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

the pot is good, but the op system and so much racism makes the very difficult to read.

1yr
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alphawolfn1Lv14

love the premise hate the author so much hypocrisy and stupidity he doesn't care if people die but if they are there from his country it's a problem he does anything for his country not caring about other countries but he's supposed to be the best

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