Hello, I really liked your book. In general, the quality is not so high, but the plot is very catchy, although I expected Ame to kill that stalker right on the doorstep. I loved how you made everyone in the chat think she's older than she really is, and I really look forward to each character's reaction to that, especially live. In the future, please create serious problems for their power growth so that Ame can use her knowledge of the plot and wisdom to complete quests, this will allow you to introduce weaker worlds for much longer. I hope the quests are more serious and life threatening, they don't have to come into the world and mock the story as they want, it will be more interesting if they just try to survive the increasingly dangerous missions.
Liked by 3 people
LIKE
Thank you for the feedback!
