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Review Detail of MLakuru in Journey of the Demon Queen

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She is so clueless it it hurts to even read. She has no memory, skill, or experience or the Demon Queen despite taking over her body or whatever and frankly she is weak as hell. This is honestly very annoying to read. If your going to give her a backround like that then give her the power that comes with it so she can protect herself. Then you have her joining the enemy sect to go undercover or some bullsh*t. Why is she even doing that? This story has the potential to be pretty decent but in my opinion its just mid because of said reasons above. I dont know how the story is going to end up in the future but I know for sure that the execution and start of the story was done very badly in my opinion and any you can do later ruined it for me so I will drop.If your going to give her the backround she has then I expected the story to be more about the war with the "good guys" with her slowly learning more about herself and her people as she also learns more about her power. What ever the hell is currently going on in the story ruined such a good story template. Im sure your going do something with the demons but like I said poor execution. You should have focused more on the demon side of the story first and let our mc come into her power and identity first before hastily trying some undercover bs like an idiot when she hardly knows where the ground is under her two feet.This is purely my opinion of the story as of of with the little chapters it has.

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