Now why would I give my own novel anything below 5 stars 😭😔🗿

It feels slightly childish with the swearing being a bit weirdly added but it seems like potential. Honestly most harem fics are sort of braindead on the romance part so I'll just not mind that and give a review later on when the story gets better.

I like spider verse......................

Intriguing if I have to say I'm quite satisfied this deserves a goryutenmetsuHado 99:Goryutenmetsu!!!!

I'm gonna be straight the plot holes are abound the author doesn't seem to have thought through or planned much of this fic. The main character is rather... you can check for yourself. Beyond that is the Chinese manhwa-like writing of '"" he said in his heart.'

I so wanted to read this but all the characters keep making dumb decisions and you nerfing the mc

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Stop writing this sorry excuse of a fiction and have your blackwash and woke ways somewhere else author.............................................................

i am black spider man.......................................................................................................................

I love harem novels, even if they are brainless and have a Chinese feel. My problem for this book might be with the MC's personality which bothered me a bit. That said, the story was pretty good and filled my free time.