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Daoist_Culture
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One of the best dual cultivation stories on wn. I found it very early and after 60 chaps its time for a review. * Writing Quality - 10/10 without a doubt. It feels like the author is a veteran writer. Lack of info dumps, all the information you get are implemented into the story in a very smart way. *Story Development - the flow of the story is perfectly balanced, right amount of action mixed with character interactions. Author knows what parts of the story need more attention, and where to cut it shot with only important parts. You wont find here 4 chapters of pointless travel without any substance or importance to the plot. You dont event thing about the pacing, because if feels like it should be that way. *Character Design - when it comes to MC, he has a deep background with "real" personality. Not an egdy boy without feeling, but a human with countless years of knowledge. And yet he is lacking in some aspects, even after reincarnation his personality grows and he is not shy to admit that. Its a fresh feeling when a former God is fascinated by the behaviour of mortals. Harems members are just great, they dont feel like pokemons (im not gonna lie, I like pokemon hunting too😅), each of them have a personality, and a real one. Not the "I like swords" "I like flowers". They have goals in life, and I can only hope for mc to keep them close. I really dont like when harem members think of mc as a 10th priority in their life, and are more interested in other stuff. For the time being there is a nice romantic feel and I hope this will stay that way. Just like our mc, his girls have interesting background and eaxh of them feel different, not a copy with changed hair color. I m a self insert, so thats important hehe. *Update Stability - i cant say much when it comes to the future, but right now we have 3 chapters daily. Author said he has more time right now and it can change it the future. But for now its amazing, chapters and very long, without fillers just to reaxh the word numbers.*World Background - this is where this book really shines, you can see lots of work and thought where put into it. Small things like places, weather...Interesting ones like inner working of a sect. Thats the first time I was really intersted how a proper sect works, what happens to the disciples after thier potential ends. There is a reason for almost everything, with a great and logical explanation. When you read it, it makes sense. There is only 60 chapters and im really hyped to know more about the world and the secrets it holds. *Lemons - its a dual cultivation book, lets face it fellow daoist, you are here for some spice. And ohh boy, the author delivers! From romantic, vanilla scenes (I cant belive i like them so much, there is one scene in the bathroom where one of his girl just dress up and man, you can see it in your mind...). Mc had a broken sword and got it fixed not long ago, so there is not a lot of "proper" cultivation (remember chap 60) but if I can read judge by what I got to this point...future looks even more amazing. Not a lot of author can write a detailed lemons with that feeling...you will find some scenes with only "pats" as author calls them, its fire! I read lots of harems, and belive me, its that good. I think I covered all of it, give it a chance guys - its worth it! A cultured daoist like me dont lie when it comes to important business... Important notes: NO NTR NO YURI All of it its in the synopsis, but lots of people dont read it 😁.Thank you Green Onion for this amazing book, and if your next novel wont have winc est i ll curse you and your pp will fall off! Give me a hot mommy and sis *cough* *cough* i mean a friend asked...😎

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Chandyl_Diala
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Why do so many People like incest do they like their relatives or something but afraid to make a move in real life so here they are looking for a novel to read with a genre IN çèst how laughable [img=disgusted]

DaoistGreenOnion
DaoistGreenOnionAuthorDaoistGreenOnion

Thank you very much for the very generous review, and a lot of kind words. I will do my best not to let it down. Thank you XD PS: lol, the world background is still joined hahaha, but I think we can just leave it like this XD PPS:Please don't curse me, that curse is very cruel XP

Daoist_Culture
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No problem, I have fun reading your novel 😁. Ofc that curse is scary...thats why you have to think of a nice future novel 🤩

DaoistGreenOnion:Thank you very much for the very generous review, and a lot of kind words. I will do my best not to let it down. Thank you XD PS: lol, the world background is still joined hahaha, but I think we can just leave it like this XD PPS:Please don't curse me, that curse is very cruel XP
Reading_Monk
Reading_MonkLv4Reading_Monk

Author, A good cultured friend of mine beseeched you to add some one in your next harem novel that will help him in keeping his bloodline pure. I am here to just pass on the message.

DaoistGreenOnion:Thank you very much for the very generous review, and a lot of kind words. I will do my best not to let it down. Thank you XD PS: lol, the world background is still joined hahaha, but I think we can just leave it like this XD PPS:Please don't curse me, that curse is very cruel XP
DaoistGreenOnion
DaoistGreenOnionAuthorDaoistGreenOnion

Lol, well if you've read that review you know I am in no position to refuse XD that curse's scary lol XD

Reading_Monk:Author, A good cultured friend of mine beseeched you to add some one in your next harem novel that will help him in keeping his bloodline pure. I am here to just pass on the message.
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Shaq_Fu
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i very much agree with this revew, try it out.

Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15Daoist_Culture

You better give me a like for that long review hehe xd

Shaq_Fu:i very much agree with this revew, try it out.
Shaq_Fu
Shaq_FuLv15Shaq_Fu

just did, 😂😂😂, i dont know how i didnt like that b4, but its fixed now 😂

Slow_down
Slow_downLv4Slow_down

i hope you keep their bloodline pure in this very novel..... i haven't started reading yet but I hope you do, you can create arc in this very novel

DaoistGreenOnion:Lol, well if you've read that review you know I am in no position to refuse XD that curse's scary lol XD
DaoistGreenOnion
DaoistGreenOnionAuthorDaoistGreenOnion

Sorry to disappoint, but that battle already ended, you can ask the author of this review, believe me, he fought hard XD There'll be no inc#st in this novel, its in non-negotiables XD I do have a curse now though, so the next novel's your lucky one XD

Slow_down:i hope you keep their bloodline pure in this very novel..... i haven't started reading yet but I hope you do, you can create arc in this very novel
Slow_down
Slow_downLv4Slow_down

hmmm may i know why are you so against this? in this type of novel?

DaoistGreenOnion:Sorry to disappoint, but that battle already ended, you can ask the author of this review, believe me, he fought hard XD There'll be no inc#st in this novel, its in non-negotiables XD I do have a curse now though, so the next novel's your lucky one XD
DaoistGreenOnion
DaoistGreenOnionAuthorDaoistGreenOnion

I wouldn't say that I was vehemently against it, it was just one of the parameters of the novel I set from the start, a promise of sorts to my readers, and it is non-negotiable since the promise has already been made, same as Yuri, Ntr and other stuff, you wouldn't want someone to negotiate that stuff into the novel at some point right? So you have to respect the other non-negotiables in order to keep the non-negotiables that are important to you, it is just not in this novel, and there is nothing anyone can say to change that at this point, same as the other non-negotiables in the novel synopsis. I did promise to include it in the next one though so you can see I am not so against it XD

Slow_down:hmmm may i know why are you so against this? in this type of novel?
Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15Daoist_Culture

DaoistGreenOnion:Sorry to disappoint, but that battle already ended, you can ask the author of this review, believe me, he fought hard XD There'll be no inc#st in this novel, its in non-negotiables XD I do have a curse now though, so the next novel's your lucky one XD
Daoist66W4wt
Daoist66W4wtLv13Daoist66W4wt

Does the mc have a mother, father, brother and sister?

Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15Daoist_Culture

No info about that yet.

Daoist66W4wt:Does the mc have a mother, father, brother and sister?
Fjdjjfjsjiwos
FjdjjfjsjiwosLv2Fjdjjfjsjiwos

And can you please then not add mc relatives at all, I beg you very much. Because it will be sad for their relationship without win cest. The novel is good, and you are a good author.

DaoistGreenOnion:I wouldn't say that I was vehemently against it, it was just one of the parameters of the novel I set from the start, a promise of sorts to my readers, and it is non-negotiable since the promise has already been made, same as Yuri, Ntr and other stuff, you wouldn't want someone to negotiate that stuff into the novel at some point right? So you have to respect the other non-negotiables in order to keep the non-negotiables that are important to you, it is just not in this novel, and there is nothing anyone can say to change that at this point, same as the other non-negotiables in the novel synopsis. I did promise to include it in the next one though so you can see I am not so against it XD
DaoistGreenOnion
DaoistGreenOnionAuthorDaoistGreenOnion

Thanks, well you will see how it goes but there are generally no female characters that have spotlight on them that will not be included in the harem so you need not worry XD There are of course a lot of women and beautiful women in the world of this novel that will not be in MC's harem, but I just never focus on them and if I do mention them, it is generally in passing, without putting too much attention on them. XD

Fjdjjfjsjiwos:And can you please then not add mc relatives at all, I beg you very much. Because it will be sad for their relationship without win cest. The novel is good, and you are a good author.
Realist_Animes
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Chandyl_Diala
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So I think the author did a Great job in writing on this beautiful work of art[img=update]

Chandyl_Diala
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So I think the author did a great job writing this beautiful work of art [img=update]

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Lord_Azathoth
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Fellow Daoist, thanks for your generosity.🙏