old man.... its missing man
I see.... will change
first, thank you for your long feedback. so now let me clear your few points. 1- the story will start as you said with transmigration, betrayal, losing someone, and all with mc weak at the start and all. 2. yeah sometimes I wrote long ch. but I am new so mistake happens. will try to cover up them in the future. 3. story will follow the way of normal mc becoming evil through tough situations where he will lose a lot. 4. the first chapter is just small story.. this will happen in future. for first chapter I wanted reader to see the interesting part. 5. well I am not good enough to make some words more interesting will try my best.
well, this is the author's comment. pls give your thoughts on it and tell me if anything needs improvement as I am new as an author. I can try to keep up the work and provide the story to the best of my abilities
yeah. I will try to do my best to provide good story. Thank you for you review. it means a lot. hope you will continue to read and provide feedback.