Review Detail of TDWSF in A life with the Author
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Mass release.I didn't like the MC from the start but the story was good.But then the MC suddenly became so much disgusting(like real disgusting,revolting) that I couldn't keep reading.
A life with the Author
Emmanuel_Capricorn
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Hey bro i liked story even with the early(though i never considered that as ntr) many people just review bomb you 1 star without even reviewing your grammar story and etc Just bcause of that 1 scene so the best thing to do for me personally is well just delete their review who is yapping about hating ntr and give early ntr tags/warning. Stand your ground man your story is good your reader is a bunch of kids
Emmanuel_Capricorn:It's true. I want theain chapter to be a good guy as well. I get hated for it in the early chapters where he walk home his ex and the way he regained the nice guy title. I want to portray him as a good guy that was why he felt Unnecessary guilty. A bad guy won't even think about the wrongs he did but he was clearly conscious of it because he is a good person. At least he thinks he is doing something horrible but it's really just a mixture of Komi's seduction that had gone on for quite some time and his incubus race WHOSE problem would also be addressed later on.
Okay man I'll read then.Please don't misunderstand, the story is good,characters have depth to them and feel geniune.It's just I can't tolerate bad characters you know like scum,evil,degenerate characters.Other than that the story is good.It is progressing very well.Keep up the good work đ
Emmanuel_Capricorn:Please read the rest of the chapters. It's explained in the later chapter. It's a first person perspective so even though he felt guilty and thinks himself as trash, he was the victim of the situation
It's true. I want theain chapter to be a good guy as well. I get hated for it in the early chapters where he walk home his ex and the way he regained the nice guy title. I want to portray him as a good guy that was why he felt Unnecessary guilty. A bad guy won't even think about the wrongs he did but he was clearly conscious of it because he is a good person. At least he thinks he is doing something horrible but it's really just a mixture of Komi's seduction that had gone on for quite some time and his incubus race WHOSE problem would also be addressed later on.
TDWSF:Okay man I'll read then.Please don't misunderstand, the story is good,characters have depth to them and feel geniune.It's just I can't tolerate bad characters you know like scum,evil,degenerate characters.Other than that the story is good.It is progressing very well.Keep up the good work đ