Mass release.I didn't like the MC from the start but the story was good.But then the MC suddenly became so much disgusting(like real disgusting,revolting) that I couldn't keep reading.
Emmanuel_Capricorn
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LIKEOkay man I'll read then.Please don't misunderstand, the story is good,characters have depth to them and feel geniune.It's just I can't tolerate bad characters you know like scum,evil,degenerate characters.Other than that the story is good.It is progressing very well.Keep up the good work đ
Emmanuel_Capricorn:Please read the rest of the chapters. It's explained in the later chapter. It's a first person perspective so even though he felt guilty and thinks himself as trash, he was the victim of the situation
It's true. I want theain chapter to be a good guy as well. I get hated for it in the early chapters where he walk home his ex and the way he regained the nice guy title. I want to portray him as a good guy that was why he felt Unnecessary guilty. A bad guy won't even think about the wrongs he did but he was clearly conscious of it because he is a good person. At least he thinks he is doing something horrible but it's really just a mixture of Komi's seduction that had gone on for quite some time and his incubus race WHOSE problem would also be addressed later on.
TDWSF:Okay man I'll read then.Please don't misunderstand, the story is good,characters have depth to them and feel geniune.It's just I can't tolerate bad characters you know like scum,evil,degenerate characters.Other than that the story is good.It is progressing very well.Keep up the good work đ
Hey bro i liked story even with the early(though i never considered that as ntr) many people just review bomb you 1 star without even reviewing your grammar story and etc Just bcause of that 1 scene so the best thing to do for me personally is well just delete their review who is yapping about hating ntr and give early ntr tags/warning. Stand your ground man your story is good your reader is a bunch of kids
Emmanuel_Capricorn:It's true. I want theain chapter to be a good guy as well. I get hated for it in the early chapters where he walk home his ex and the way he regained the nice guy title. I want to portray him as a good guy that was why he felt Unnecessary guilty. A bad guy won't even think about the wrongs he did but he was clearly conscious of it because he is a good person. At least he thinks he is doing something horrible but it's really just a mixture of Komi's seduction that had gone on for quite some time and his incubus race WHOSE problem would also be addressed later on.