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Did you steal another man's work? This is the fanfiction called "Dial". Written by some guy years ago which now there is a second book(basically continuation of the first fanfiction). I thought maybe you uploaded it here with permission but no you did not. In the first chapter you said enjoy MY story which is not your story??? Shame on you thief.

Hey my man! Can you give me the link to Celestial Grimoire you use please? and caň you tell me which version do you use like v1 v2 or v3. I've been trying to find Celestial Grimoire at least v2. I'd really like it if ypu could help me.

I gave it all my daily 3 power stones. I love Omnitrix/Marvel ff and there aren't much of them anywhere. I hope you keep up the good writing and don't make the same mistakes every author of Omnitrix/Marvel ff authors do. If there is one thing I want then it's the usage and the PROPER usage of Alien X or other Universal level reality warper aliens in the watch. Thanks for your the story

In one of the episodes when he went Mach 50 he almost destroyed the world. I know you just want to show how powerful and fast he is but it just looked cringe to me. Just telling .

I guess I wanted different story-lines in this ff even if the people and the villains are the same and they do the almost same thing they did in comics. I've just read same things over and over so I've searched for something unique. Anyway I'll wait and keep reading just bc you asked me to my man.

If Damien is truly Mephisto and that contract is some kind of a soul contract I'm dropping this ff. This is the kind of awful story telling that I hate. Literally every fu.king spider man in every fu.king spider man ff his girlfriend does something extremely STUPID. Why? you may ask :) Of fu.king course to "save him". By making illogical idiotic contracts or by letting themselves get taken advantaged or some other sh.t. I thought this was a good spider man ff after so long. I was going to say nothing until this Damien stuff adressed and concluded but I couldn't hold myself. It seems like it will take a while for Damien arc or whatever but if it doesn't get adressed by Peter finding out about it or Felicia telling him I'm just dropping. I hate it when writers do this exact same thing over and over. Enough ranting... It was going good and I hope it gets fixed or I'm leaving. Thanks for the chapter and the story 👋

This is like all of the annoying fics.I really can not fathom HOW can MC's be put into situations like this. They need to be utterly stupid to fall into a trap or get stranded or sealed and more. It's like MC's can't use their brains when they get aweseome powers.Ultimatrix is literally Omnipotent even if it's restricted.Storylines like this seems utterly stupid to me.Maybe it's only to me because I can think of 10 other ways to not be put into situations like this.How can a guy with a power that lets him have literally EVERY power in existence be this unresorceful and unwise.Still a good story and there are very few good Marvel with Omnitrix fics around so I will keep reading. I just want to say you are for the last 5-10 chapters making the MC really unlikeable with all of his choices and actions and I can't see his desicions as character growth.I hope this gets better.Thanks for the chapter my man.

+1

Never seen this one on a relationship with an MC. Could be nice I think?

Started great went to sh*t.He makes friends and they die.He makes a friend/flirt and she dies.I guess the only way for the MC to have character development is for people close to him die.I don't even want to get in to the fact that he just left a friend alone in a dangerous mission.He just assumed she would be okay and just left.THE MC IS JUST FU*KING STUPID.