Review Detail of Hansel_Mieres in A life with the Author

I read the description but since you said that there was no NTR I entered without fear, but at least for my part that I just read the story up to where it is, the NTR part was quite strong until a little tachycardia gave me you do not consider it NTR, well, the act did not take place, but think about who would observe the entire process while they groped their girlfriend just to confirm something, not to mention that they waited until the last moment to interrupt. I thought it was that they were trying to NTR him but I stopped him before everything happened but hey my only advice to improve would be to modify that part a bit so that it is not so strong or at least that it intervenes at the same moment of the blackmail and such You see, the work improves a little more, that will have to be made some adjustments to the follow-up, but all for a perfect work.