Author, you have some way of speaking, where I can give you some suggestions as a reader of things that could be improved in the novel to make it more perfect.

I read the description but since you said that there was no NTR I entered without fear, but at least for my part that I just read the story up to where it is, the NTR part was quite strong until a little tachycardia gave me you do not consider it NTR, well, the act did not take place, but think about who would observe the entire process while they groped their girlfriend just to confirm something, not to mention that they waited until the last moment to interrupt. I thought it was that they were trying to NTR him but I stopped him before everything happened but hey my only advice to improve would be to modify that part a bit so that it is not so strong or at least that it intervenes at the same moment of the blackmail and such You see, the work improves a little more, that will have to be made some adjustments to the follow-up, but all for a perfect work.

I read the description but since you said that there was no NTR I entered without fear, but at least for my part that I just read the story up to where it is, the NTR part was quite strong until a little tachycardia gave me you do not consider it NTR, well, the act did not take place, but think about who would observe the entire process while they groped their girlfriend just to confirm something, not to mention that they waited until the last moment to interrupt. I thought it was that they were trying to NTR him but I stopped him before everything happened but hey my only advice to improve would be to modify that part a bit so that it is not so strong or at least that it intervenes at the same moment of the blackmail and such You see, the work improves a little more, that will have to be made some adjustments to the follow-up, but all for a perfect work.

Además de que pones personajes de otras regiones en kanto, y captura pokemon y se enfrenta a pokemon que no de verían salir en esta, también esta el hecho de que el pikachu recién recibido uso volá voltio, como es posible si eso lo aprende en los últimos niveles. Por mi parte digo que aunque no siga la trama debería ir de región en región y si puede que consiga uno o dos pokemon que no pertenecen a la región en la que está pero hasta ahí.

Autor tengo que decir que la descripción y las etiquetas me llamaron la atención y bueno yo hablo español que más decir, entonces empecé a leer pero pronto me desmotive por el enrredo pues para algo son las regiones y si bien puedes poner algunos pokemon de otra región no significa que pongas que en canto salen todos cuando no es así.

Author It's not for nothing but I could continue your other novel Stealing the protagonist yandere lovers that it's been about 2 months since you updated it.

Bro, it's appreciated that you keep uploading entertaining novels but could you please not leave Villain: Destiny Transfer System on hiatus, please continue it because at least I liked it and it's been about 1 month since you released any chapters.

Author, well I just want to tell you that I was going to start reading it but when I saw more or less the first chapters as it unfolds in the world of Black Bullet I decided that it was better not to read it, not because it has anything against lolis but what it did in that world was too exaggerated, not to mention that they can use dou qi in a world where it doesn't exist. And well, I also don't like fanfiction from that world simply because of the same thing that the protagonist of your novel did.

Author, don't tell me that now he forgets everything and everything because he allowed himself to be caught as a fool

Author, I only ask that the protagonist not do as the original anime did, and that if Ruka approaches him, he rejects her because of the friend or for something else. As for the rest, you will know what to do. I personally prefer that he keep all the Waifus because in itself it is a fanfiction of a series that is about that, although it failed and well, all readers will not have the same opinions and some will want to some waifu and others to another and for everyone to be happy that would be the best way and well also that is what I want.

Author very good your novel so far. It's been a while since I found one that hooked me. The only thing I ask of you is that you don't do as in a comment you made that he was with several girls and then get rid of them and stay with one. For my part, Il prefer that he stay with all those that are related to him in the anime. And please, what I ask of you the most is that you are not going to put any of them with some other guy or that they NTR the protagonist.

Very good your novel so far. It's been a while since I found one that hooked me. The only thing I ask of you is that you don't do as in a comment you made that he was with several girls and then get rid of them and stay with one. For my part, I prefer that he stay with all those that are related to him in the anime. And please, what I ask of you the most is that you are not going to put any of them with some other guy or that they NTR the protagonist.

Author, I have a question to see if you can answer it, I have read up to chapter 35 nothing else but I am left with the doubt that he finally stays with Li Yuling. Mainly I prefer that with the MC but I don't understand you for going through the tug of war if you're going to give it to someone and that's over. If it's Wang Ming, I don't see why he should continue to increase favorability with the MC and if it's in the MC, I don't see why you need to keep bringing Wang Ming in because it's stressful. For example, you are chasing a girl and suddenly you see her kissing or hugging another. Please tell me to see if it motivates me to continue reading. And no, I can't stand MCs who give girls away to others and walk around on mats, I prefer selfish MCs.

Author, I have a question to see if you can answer it, I've read up to this chapter nothing more but I'm left with the doubt that he finally stays with Li Yuling. Mainly I prefer that with the MC but I don't understand you for going through the tug of war if you're going to give it to someone and that's over. If it's Wang Ming, I don't see why he should continue to increase favorability with the MC and if it's in the MC, I don't see why you need to keep bringing Wang Ming in because it's stressful. For example, you are chasing a girl and suddenly you see her kissing or hugging another. Please tell me to see if it motivates me to continue reading. And no, I can't stand MCs who give girls away to others and walk around on mats, I prefer selfish MCs.

Autor puedes por favor decirme como se llama y donde buscar tu historia principal que dices en la sinopsis. Pues busque en tu perfil y no la encontré.

Author for me your novel is very good, the only thing I find that I don't like and I think you should change is the main character's way of thinking by not wanting to approach women because he doesn't know if they have a partner. Mainly because a real life example would be that if every time you like someone you find out they have a partner and then you decide not to get close, you will be left alone because most beautiful women have a partner, so if you don't take risks you don't win. . Come on, you are not going to leave a woman you like without trying just because she has a partner. The netory in the novels is good and gives more entertainment, now don't go to put NTR that is bad and makes you stop reading novels.

Hello, can someone tell me if the protagonist's aunt and adoptive mother has a relationship with the protagonist's superior or not? The doubt is that this freaks me out, come on, if the author wants to put in more development, he can well make this one the protagonist or leave her alone, he doesn't have to let the main character's superior fuck her. I ask the question since I am in the first chapters and that has me out of the wave for what I would like to know.

Hello, can someone tell me if the protagonist's aunt and adoptive mother has a relationship with the protagonist's superior or not? The doubt is that this freaks me out, come on, if the author wants to put in more development, he can well make this one the protagonist or leave her alone, he doesn't have to let the main character's superior fuck her. I ask the question since I am in the first chapters and that has me out of the wave for what I would like to know.

Author is already boring the MC's way of acting that of spending points on anything instead of using them on something useful, I spend 12000 points just to climb the stairs easier. Besides that almost no progress in the story will now.

Author I don't mean to criticize but please hope that the next conditions of upgrading the MC's cultivation level will be more reasonable. For example, that of having to level up all his partners in order to level up, the protagonist is forced to always be below his women. Despite the fact that you have already given each woman a supreme talent that they level up as if they were eating, that easy and to top it off now puts the restriction on the MC who has to help them first to improve all of them in order to improve a little the It is better that the women are a little independent of him and that he does not have to constantly help them. Apart from the fact that practically none of the women has been to fall in love with him since he didn't even try to do it. He only knows how to bribe them to be with him.