The writing quality and grammar is phenomenal for a fanfic but the character interaction is bland and all the characters speak overly formal to one another and even characters we know that have spicy personalities speak as if they are at a high society ball. It completely turned me off from the story. There has been little to no world settings and background. I feel this is not the fanfic or story the author should be writing with his/her writing style. This was not fun or immersive to read.
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