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VenerableZay
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2023-08-09 08:56

Yo, my opinion for this fic is very good, little to no grammatical error, I love how the story developed and don't follow the canon too much, the mcs personality may seems(to me) annoying sometimes but still tolerable, I love how unexpected twist occurs here and there, the update stability is good enough and I like how the characters are not just 1 dimensional beings but also shows emotion. I don't really give this much reviews to others but if I found a fic I liked ill try to give my honest review. Overall its good fic y'all should read it

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Depraved_Chap
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Thank you for the review! Though I must ask, what exactly do you find annoying about the MC’s personality(Just for Future Refrence). I know that he doesn’t suit some people preferences, but I‘d find it enlightening to know what you in particular see as annoying.

VenerableZay
VenerableZayLv4

not particularly annoying to boot but sometimes his excessive cockiness may or may not click something in my brains that I found annoying sometimes

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