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Supreme_Lazy_Otaku
Supreme_Lazy_OtakuLv31yr
2023-08-04 07:39

This story is one of the best story I have encounter. Everything is just 5 star. But I don't really like the mc's personality. He is too realistic, and doesn't seem to have the basic compassion. Basically I feel like even if kids ask him for a small help, mc won't help unless there is benefit. Perhaps I would get it if there is a background explaining what the reason for mc's personality, otherwise it would just make mc look like a sociopath. But I don't think I can keep reading until that time. So yeah, while this story is very interesting, the mc just aren't my cup of tea. But keep up the good work, it's very good.

Arifureta: God of Extinction

Depraved_Chap
4.8
49 Chs

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Depraved_Chap
Depraved_ChapAuthor

Thank you for the review! I was hoping to slip his past background into the story at some point, but if you really aren’t enjoying it at the moment, that’s completely fine. I figured the MC’s personality would be a turnoff for some, since it isn’t a character everyone would like seeing. Your feedback is much appreciated, and I hope you find a story you can enjoy!

1yr
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Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

I think the same as what the person in the review commented, basic mercy is something we all have, but the MC seems not to have it which is... Unsettling, it's like something non-human and honestly that type of personality would fit very well if the MC was a bloodthirsty monster, but we don't know anything about the MC or his past, which prevents the reader (including me) from creating closeness or sympathy with the MC, instead it creates a feeling of incompatibility and rejection, I repeat, if the MC was a robot or a murderous monster I would understand the MC's attitude and honestly it wouldn't bother me. By not knowing the MC or his past and adding his insensitive attitude to the most basic attitude that the human being should have, he created a sensation of rejection and concern in me, I don't know if that is your goal but you achieve it very well (like documentaries about murderers and their atrocities, I felt that same unpleasant feeling in my stomach) I don't know if I managed to express myself well, English is my second language

Depraved_Chap:Thank you for the review! I was hoping to slip his past background into the story at some point, but if you really aren’t enjoying it at the moment, that’s completely fine. I figured the MC’s personality would be a turnoff for some, since it isn’t a character everyone would like seeing. Your feedback is much appreciated, and I hope you find a story you can enjoy!
1yr
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Wesh2003
Wesh2003Lv4

author i love mc who are realistic please don't change such a character. Thanks

Depraved_Chap:Thank you for the review! I was hoping to slip his past background into the story at some point, but if you really aren’t enjoying it at the moment, that’s completely fine. I figured the MC’s personality would be a turnoff for some, since it isn’t a character everyone would like seeing. Your feedback is much appreciated, and I hope you find a story you can enjoy!
1yr
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Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

Realistic 💀...

Wesh2003:author i love mc who are realistic please don't change such a character. Thanks
1yr
6
Gintoki_otieno
Gintoki_otienoLv12

🙄🙄

Wesh2003:author i love mc who are realistic please don't change such a character. Thanks
1yr
1
CaptLight78
CaptLight78Lv5

Not even close to realistic.

Wesh2003:author i love mc who are realistic please don't change such a character. Thanks
1yr
DaoistzEswsL
DaoistzEswsLLv11

Me I love it don't bother replying to me saying that moral stuff when I just want to enjoy my time

Depraved_Chap:Thank you for the review! I was hoping to slip his past background into the story at some point, but if you really aren’t enjoying it at the moment, that’s completely fine. I figured the MC’s personality would be a turnoff for some, since it isn’t a character everyone would like seeing. Your feedback is much appreciated, and I hope you find a story you can enjoy!
1yr
Other Reviews
Depraved_Chap
Depraved_ChapAuthor

Yea, it’s a great read, I encourage you to try it out…..I’m not shameless, you are. Jokes aside, if you enjoy this story, feel free to leave a review or any constructive criticism you may have. Who knows, your suggestions might be included.

1yr

literl010
literl010Lv1

The protagonist won't be everyone's cup of tea, I wouldn't call the protagonist evil, at least not yet, he's more selfish and pragmatic. He wouldn't lift a finger to save someone's life unless it benefited him in some way, or it suited his whims. Still, his character is consistent and a ton of fun. Writing style and quality is superb, word choice is excellent, and descriptions are detailed and engaging. Grammar and spelling are pretty much perfect, far above the normal standard on WN. The plot so far is interesting, it's not just a boring retelling of canon, and whilst still at the relatively early stages, I'm really looking forward to learning what happens next. Dialogue feels natural and flows properly, supporting and side characters have their own distinct personalities and motivations. No romance yet (as of chapter 24) although there are a couple of potential candidates. I'm hoping for a harem due to the characterisation displayed so far, but nothing confirmed yet. All in all, if you don't mind a selfish protagonist, you won't be disappointed. Definitely give it a read.

1yr
Apolonchene06
Apolonchene06Lv5

Here is my review of the novel with screenshots because webnovel won't let me post it.

1yr
Lao_Stev
Lao_StevLv3

MC is a bit too selfish and arrogant (Sometimes beyond logic) for my tastes, but overall a good quality story, though I probably won't continue it unless he receive some character development. I'm tired of hearing how he can do something just because he's Aziel Nox or some him alpha male BS.

1yr
MapleHinataSyrup
MapleHinataSyrupLv1

I want some vampire "action" if you know what I mean, then please by all means, I wonder though how nagumo will happen it's quite interesting to think about so I'll stick to this

1yr
MapleHinataSyrup
MapleHinataSyrupLv1

Is the new cover suzu??? Looks great!! If not then .................................................................................................................................................................................................................

1yr
ZEINOM
ZEINOMLv1

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1yr
97Alex
97AlexLv14

Pretty good, i always enjoyed characters that are selfish and evil and this mc is just the type i like the most. Hope to see more of this in the future, many good ones were abandoned

1yr
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

im really nervous, im stocking chapters of this awesome work but with how long it takes for it to update it just might be droppedl please dont author

1yr
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