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anish_44Lv1310mth
2024-01-07 21:13

This story concept has real potential. The idea of living parallel lives in different worlds when sleeping is totally unique. I'm fascinated to see how the medical mystery and dual reality twist play out across realms. Adding romantic elements and suspicious characters was a nice touch too. While parts are still ambiguous, the setup reels you in with its imaginative premise. If the narrative pays off on all its intriguing threads, this could be really memorable sci-fi fantasy. I'm looking forward to finding out more!

Half me and half...

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❤️Thank you. ❤️ You're welcome with great joy! I hope you stay to enjoy Luna's journey between the two worlds and keep her in your library. ❤️❤️❤️

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