Read to the last possible chapter: 38. The overall consensus that I've drawn is that this book is a moderately well written book. he overall background behind is inherently unique, in a way it reminds me of the movie Jumper. The writing quality is well - written, clean, yet lacks description that paints the necessary picture to support the writing. Story development wise, is that it's good. However, one of the biggest drawbacks is the character - design. The main character is the depth, and are 2 sides are shown of him-- the ruthless mc, and the carefree one. Although this is shown, the other extras are treated as baggage that become discarded within a chapter or two. More or less cannon fodder with a personality so shallow, it is as if I'm wading through a puddle. This of course is only in the volume 1, as the situation improves through the development of volume 2. In conclusion, it's a pretty good read, and I hope the author doesn't drop this.
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Thanks for the review!There will be more characters in the future that are not just disposable extras, but are important to the story, so they should be more fleshed out. I hope that your opinion on the character design will change then.And I haven't been paying much attention to the descriptions, so thanks for pointing that out! I'll try my best to improve (:
