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2023-11-17 11:25

(2 2 1 3 3)/5= 2.2sigh......________________________________________@Suiyan.....I'm going to keep reading this because of the standard you established with "Death.. and Me" and "Is this a Wisp." ________________________________________this time the novel might as well be a copy paste of the most common and abused genre. ________________________________________aka: "A supreme dies with grievances. then reincarnates with knowledge enough to think of how current enemies and allies as ants. his goal is vengeance. as he returns to his former strength, girls will fall for him left and right. he will turn the most cautious and doubtful of girls into bashful maidens with next to no development other than "he suddenly started acting different." A kid started acting like an adult.Hell! you killed the elf girls's character. ________________________________________she seemed to be a teenager who made a final stand based on sorrow and anger for her younger sibling or child. then she bonded with the MC's mother and swore to protect the MC. ________________________________________that there is a fairly good origin! then she suddenly turns out to have agreed to become the MC's concubine..,.. not an arranged marriage but an arranged breeder of convenience ..... and then she reverts to an easily blushing maiden who's heart flutters when the MC's breathes in a manly way.....homes..... as much as i love the two novels I mentioned. I'm only continuing this because of the trust you've built through those. otherwise this here is a rinsed and repeated regurgitated and ruined genre .......

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This book was concluded prematurely due to its issues. I suggest you give a chance to my new book, 'Duality of Shadows.' It is more akin to Suiyan's previous works. If you decide to give it a try, perhaps you'll enjoy it :)

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