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Jack_Priper
Jack_PriperLv61yr
2023-11-17 11:25

(2 2 1 3 3)/5= 2.2sigh......________________________________________@Suiyan.....I'm going to keep reading this because of the standard you established with "Death.. and Me" and "Is this a Wisp." ________________________________________this time the novel might as well be a copy paste of the most common and abused genre. ________________________________________aka: "A supreme dies with grievances. then reincarnates with knowledge enough to think of how current enemies and allies as ants. his goal is vengeance. as he returns to his former strength, girls will fall for him left and right. he will turn the most cautious and doubtful of girls into bashful maidens with next to no development other than "he suddenly started acting different." A kid started acting like an adult.Hell! you killed the elf girls's character. ________________________________________she seemed to be a teenager who made a final stand based on sorrow and anger for her younger sibling or child. then she bonded with the MC's mother and swore to protect the MC. ________________________________________that there is a fairly good origin! then she suddenly turns out to have agreed to become the MC's concubine..,.. not an arranged marriage but an arranged breeder of convenience ..... and then she reverts to an easily blushing maiden who's heart flutters when the MC's breathes in a manly way.....homes..... as much as i love the two novels I mentioned. I'm only continuing this because of the trust you've built through those. otherwise this here is a rinsed and repeated regurgitated and ruined genre .......

Rebirth of the Chaos Tree

Suiyan
4.5
166 Chs

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Eihei_JF
Eihei_JFLv12

This book was concluded prematurely due to its issues. I suggest you give a chance to my new book, 'Duality of Shadows.' It is more akin to Suiyan's previous works. If you decide to give it a try, perhaps you'll enjoy it :)

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Shameless author's review: Hey, guys! Suiyan here, once again, with another book... once again... =X I won't lie, this is very different from what I've doing so far. You are used to a big WOW in the first chapters as I usually add something that you don't see out there, like the twins in Death's book or the Crown's book. However, this one doesn't have this sudden new trope. I'm being a lot more conservative, even because this is my first time trying the Haren Genre. However, you can expect the other usual things. For example, you won't find out that every single stone on the road has a Chinese name. This story will cross Universes, so it would be ridiculous if that was the case. Anyway, I'm open to reviews and comments, so I hope you give it a try.

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Seshawamo
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This is definitely a common cultivation novel, which is not a bad thing. These types stopped appearing because in WN as everyone wanted to add something different. Now different is the new common, so I'm happy to see one out here going back to the roots. It is very well written and interesting, which is obviously a must if you want to keep me. Will continue reading to see how it goes. I just wonder how long Lian can pretend to not romantically care about the girls. kkkkk

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CleberCB
CleberCBLv14

Quite a big change from suiyan's first two books. There is a lot more ruthlessness. Still, it is incredibly interesting and captivating. Whether he can succeed in the Haren Genre is yet to be seen. Nonetheless, these first fifteen chapters were truly a great read. Keep it up!

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Kagei
KageiLv1

I like that too. Even though there are still a few chapters available, the beginning of the story was solid and the author did a great job setting up the world and the harem. The chapters are a decent size and nothing feels rushed. I'm curious to see where this story is going, and so far, it's been a very promising start. I'll definitely keep following along to read more.

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sunshintun
sunshintunLv11

So, a quick review of what I've seen so far.1- First of all, I'm quite adept to fast paced novels, that's because I like when the story progresses. This one has a quite fast pace, and I love it.2-The descriptions of the main character were basically the only time the author spent a lot of words at. Other than that, rarely he waste too much words just to tell how nice or bad something looks like. Another advantage of a novel with fast pace, I guess?3-The story is well written and interesting. Even though it isn't that different from other cultivation novels out there, the author made it very interesting.4-As for the haren part, some women appeared already, and I quite like them. I want to see how their relationship develops.5- Updates don't leave nothing to complain about, 14 chapters per week is quite good. I wonder if this pace will continue.Well, all in all, I'm liking it. I hope the author will continue

1yr
lianboares
lianboaresLv11

Incredibly well written. At first, it looks somewhat generic. However, the author was able to make it really interesting. All the elements are in their proper place, and the twists are truly good! Especially the Traitor Chapter. I hope it continue like this.

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Haofo
HaofoLv1

So far, the plot has been interesting and entertaining, and the female protagonists are being carefully developed. For those who appreciate an extremely powerful protagonist, capable of quickly solving problems, along with a cultivation harem, this story is highly recommended.

1yr
Eihei_JF
Eihei_JFLv12

The story has an excellent premise and follows several common tropes found in other similar stories. It's enjoyable to follow the gradual development of the characters, especially considering that the author releases one or two chapters daily. I'm really enjoying the story so far, and it seems to be progressing at a satisfactory pace.

1yr
Jorge07
Jorge07Lv2

This story has a different approach from anything the author has written before. It starts with several clichés seen in other stories, but these clichés are often used because they are fun, so it's not a big problem. The reading is enjoyable and entertaining, so if you like the genre, you won't be disappointed.

1yr
PocketDao
PocketDaoLv11

The story so far is developing well. I didnt give full stars to story development because i felt it was a little rushed. Still, it has been very interesting. Will continue to read for now since it is free.

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