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2023-07-18 03:46

So, a quick review of what I've seen so far.1- First of all, I'm quite adept to fast paced novels, that's because I like when the story progresses. This one has a quite fast pace, and I love it.2-The descriptions of the main character were basically the only time the author spent a lot of words at. Other than that, rarely he waste too much words just to tell how nice or bad something looks like. Another advantage of a novel with fast pace, I guess?3-The story is well written and interesting. Even though it isn't that different from other cultivation novels out there, the author made it very interesting.4-As for the haren part, some women appeared already, and I quite like them. I want to see how their relationship develops.5- Updates don't leave nothing to complain about, 14 chapters per week is quite good. I wonder if this pace will continue.Well, all in all, I'm liking it. I hope the author will continue

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