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Blade1243
Blade1243Lv151yr
2023-12-20 15:34

This story is pretty good all things considered. There are spelling errors found only 0-3 times a chapter and minor inconsistencies with abilities. My only major issue is the 2 fast passes needed to gain one chapter, essentially requiring the reader to invest more into it. It is likely better to search for 2 cheaper reads with similar quality to this story, but I will say that this story isn't a bad read. I only wish more people could enjoy reading it with fast passes, but every chapter needs 2 passes to unlock.I will also mention that I am about 150 chapters in and know next to nothing about the world and geography besides it being coastal/humid area(🦂). Only Three cities were ever mentioned in the story at this point as well. If the author doesn't get better with world building, the quality may decrease with time.

The Soul System in the Apocalypse

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Alan_Wafula
Alan_WafulaAuthor

The second part of the novel will be there but not now. Still, the main character in the novel will be involved in another novel whose release will be on 15th May 2024. See you there guys....

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Primas
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What's so legendary about human trafficking , what happening with peoples's brain know days

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Alan_Wafula
Alan_WafulaAuthor

I can only give myself five stars as I believe that I'm presenting quality work. Please rate my confidence.

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Ajay_2
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Good novel for me. Just, speed up the plot progress and it'll be even more exciting.

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DaoistSrynko
DaoistSrynkoLv3

To be honest: it‘s utterly unreadable. I love the setting, and the story might have potential but the authors grasp of the English language is insufficient. Horrendous grammar and limited vocabulary. If you want to salvage this novel you need to get an editor to rewrite the entire thing. As it stands now, the quality is around the level of a machine translated novel.

1yr
Iseeyou
IseeyouLv15

A good novel with good potential just need to keep posting more chapters.

1yr
levelgates
levelgatesLv11

I already love the synopsis and the first chapter. I wonder how the following chapters will be like....

1yr
DaoistOQepfb
DaoistOQepfbLv4

Nice story, just keep posting more chapters.

1yr
Moon_fire
Moon_fireLv3

Nice novel, the pacing is great and the main character is awesome too[img=recommend]

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Shadow_0846
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love how the novel is playing but for god sake why always use the cliché of swordman with their sword when they are thousand weapons apart of the sword. p.s my personal opinion .

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