Blade1243

Good so far, at least the first dozen chapters have nothing wrong at all and the story flows nicely with enough details and events to keep it flow smoothly.

Cop: "People don't lie. Its just not possible."

i thought the academy would not like the heirs on their tier one clans getting mana contracted, but maybe it was an academy one

Shaq reincarnated into a magical world with this one

Nets=Mets

"IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN ME, NOT HIM!"

Good story so far though.

It is a very stupid strategy to send units this far apart. you could simply have knights split between your infantry and have nearly 3 to 1 fights. Sure it limits explosive damage, but now your army is fighting for attrition, not to win.

there was literally no reason for him to do that, even he would benefit greatly from 30+ mutant cores.

A lot of discrepancies and too much flavour text at times make it hard to read, but finding a better novel is like looking for a needle in a haystack.