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Ayush_Gupta_2825
Ayush_Gupta_2825Lv36mth
2024-09-19 22:17

well, writing quality is very good, i loved story development but maybe it was a little rushed and world building isn't particularly focus of this novel. I absolutely loved system - tasks and rewarding by it. This is my favorite system so far among the system novels i've read. And Mc interaction with females is also good but I would've loved if writer gave few more chapters for developing chemistry between them. And power or cultivation levelling and skillset all of them is simple to understand and awesome. So for me, this novel is above average and close to excellent becoz of shortage of chapters. So, this is a must read for readers who like bit of plot and slow revenge along with s** chapters. Ofcourse there is enough of those scenes to enjoy.😉

My Evil Stepson System

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240 Chs

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Dayruth_675
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Is the book good?

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Justin_Gabventure
Justin_GabventureLv13

The Synopsis alone is eye catching and one of it's kind. The author is experienced in the art of writing and this book is the product of an interesting idea... What more are you waiting for!? Add to library!

1yr

Prachi_Malviya_0299
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why ....all people in this the app...are..perverts...

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Megabyte
MegabyteAuthor

Have fun reading the book and hope you enjoy it just as much as I enjoy writing it

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pure_bad
pure_badLv11

the revenge story is the best, I just want to go to the scene of his stepmother

1yr
shyfix291
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NoNameDao
NoNameDaoLv13

i'm fking uncomfortable with the whole "revenge" plot.

1yr
Sufs
SufsLv4

not gonna lie but started reading this when it first got launched and been hooked its been one of thee most interesting system novels ive read so far up until the end amazing work Author 😎🔥

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TH3_Milkman
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The ending was a bit rushed and missed some important information, but overall it was awesome[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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JaKon
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I liked the whole story.[img=recommend]0

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