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Dame_Desu_Yo
Dame_Desu_YoLv41yr
2023-07-10 16:54

This is honest review, for once I'm happy because it's another Overload Fanfiction with Original Character MC. Buttt !!!! 5/5Here is the downside, the author seems doesn't know much about overlord and it's world system, and I get the feeling that this is not Overlord/Yggderasill game anymore. 1/5so yeah It's good concepts but worse execution.The writing quality is good, but the story progression seems kinda hasting. 3/5

Overlord: The Dragon King

HiTherefic
4.7
16 Chs

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HiTherefic
HiThereficAuthor

Ehh you right, thx for being honest like I have said I don’t really know the game part.

1yr
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

wait, so this is a fanfic about yggdrasil and not new world? i always skip the yggdrasil part, no point in reading about the game as it has no impact irl.

HiTherefic:Ehh you right, thx for being honest like I have said I don’t really know the game part.
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PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

even the original anime/manga/novel skips that part.

PsyLoRD:wait, so this is a fanfic about yggdrasil and not new world? i always skip the yggdrasil part, no point in reading about the game as it has no impact irl.
1yr
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HiTherefic
HiThereficAuthor

No it's about the new world

PsyLoRD:wait, so this is a fanfic about yggdrasil and not new world? i always skip the yggdrasil part, no point in reading about the game as it has no impact irl.
1yr
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PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

great, i'm gonna give it a try.

HiTherefic:No it's about the new world
1yr
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HiTherefic
HiThereficAuthor

The game World is filled with lots of time skips

PsyLoRD:great, i'm gonna give it a try.
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Yuki_55
Yuki_55Lv14

Romance? Harem? [Part of the no Harem Sect so just give it me straight, dont want to waste my time for no reason]

HiTherefic:Ehh you right, thx for being honest like I have said I don’t really know the game part.
1yr
HiTherefic
HiThereficAuthor

No harem just romance

Yuki_55:Romance? Harem? [Part of the no Harem Sect so just give it me straight, dont want to waste my time for no reason]
1yr
RatedOverr
RatedOverrLv2

Are you willing to spoil who the love interest is...?

HiTherefic:No harem just romance
1yr
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Is this dropped ?

HiTherefic:Ehh you right, thx for being honest like I have said I don’t really know the game part.
1yr
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FatherGun
FatherGunLv4

Always love a overlord fanfic where the Mc isn’t Ainzs

1yr

GeeGeeTeeWuu
GeeGeeTeeWuuLv14

haven't read it yet but someone rated 1 star without any input, I'll rate 5 to balance things out.

1yr
Child_of_Azathoth
Child_of_AzathothLv13

I love overlord songs and I love dragon main characters, so 5 stars.

1yr
Sergio_Navarrete
Sergio_NavarreteLv3

Pretty good start. Keep it up author!

1yr
ZynauxX_
ZynauxX_Lv2

My opinion Personally I love Overlord, that's because we follow the villain's story, something unusual in anime. The main element that makes overlord incredible is the yggdrasil power system (races, jobs, spells, items, worlds, guilds), Maruyama manages to give a unique characteristic to each character despite the cliches, this means that despite the huge difference in New world levels don't spoil the story. There are two things that I personally didn't like. 1- "no level limits" the MC of this story is level 1000+ that makes level max(100) nothing more than garbage, which breaks the fun of the story a lot, since it doesn't it has a good development which is normal for someone who is not a professional writer. 2- the other is obviously the waste of the "Yggdrasil System" that shows levels (def, atk, spatk...) jobs, races, that lets us know exactly how character building works, but this new system is just confusing as it's not that informative. Despite all this, congratulations author, you are improving your writing with each chapter, there are no good overlord fics, this is one of the few fun to read, so keep going :)

1yr
madbuha
madbuhaLv4

great novel, please keep updating and don't drop it .......................................................................................................

1yr
Oji_san_ecchi
Oji_san_ecchiLv4

terus pertahankan author, novel diawal sungguh sangat menarik ditambah saya menikmati membaca novelmu ini... lanjutkan

1yr
Crazywriter_102
Crazywriter_102Lv10

Reveal spoiler

1yr
wisdomseeker
wisdomseekerLv14

Tbh this fanfic has potential but slow updates. Thank you for the fanfic tho

1yr
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