Item: barely attached by fate
Rating: 5
Author: Jov_175

Jov_175Lv311mth

2024-05-21 14:17

Amazing book, I was really interested by the dialogs between the characters as it is very well done. I would love to see the book go further.

barely attached by fate

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I find the story very touching and appreciate the author's portrayal of the character. The way the chapters end, leaving you with a sense of curiosity and a desire to know what will happen next, is indeed an excellent storytelling technique. It creates anticipation and keeps the reader engaged. Keep up. The good work there is some punctuation mistake but they can be fixed.

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I can say that the synopsis hooked me from the start, but I find it lengthy to read, so it needs to be divided into paragraphs. In that way, readers would have the 'feel' for it. Now for the novel's content, there are a few grammar mistakes in the dialogues, but the story development makes up for that. I love a good contemporary romance especially when the author gives a spice into it like it's not a typical trope. Keep it up, author-nim!

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