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No, no. There is the girl, the mother and Liam. They are preparing for an event, I didn't specify her coming into the scene. I see.
It's supposed to be a hopeless rhetorical question, they have lived together their whole lives and this wasn't the first time it had happened. He is just asking himself in disappointment and disbelief. But the readers don't know that still, thank you for pointing it out.
Oh, you're right. I should have added a graphical to make it easier for readers to imagine it. It's like a daze, focus and creative light returned to his eyes.
thank you for the idea i will see what i can do.
Yes do you like it
Thank you for your feedback. I did it really quickly before but I shall change it right now, for a better one.
the author praising himself
if he doesn't accept her offer I'm gonna kill him.
that's just to settle her as the MCs FL