Item: barely attached by fate
Rating: 4.8
Author: Sara_Weber_9938

Sara_Weber_9938Lv137mth

2024-05-05 12:01

I love your writing style. Your words are very creative and well-crafted with the way you use them. I truly love the suspense and thrill you get as you read, which has me hooked. Each chapter has its own pace and more details unfold as you read along.

barely attached by fate

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