Really good chapter!

Thank you so much for the kind review

Thank you. I'm excited to hear you like it.

You're welcome. I can't wait to read more.

You are very welcome 🙂

This story is at a good start. Each chapter flows smoothly together, which makes the pacing good. The MC does have a few funny moments. What's nice, the readers are just at the start of knowing this character. Edgy events do happen fast, and this puts the reader on alert. The author also has the character freshly starting to learn his skills, and that gives it a realistic feeling. It's a novel that gives the MC a chance to show his growth. Good job author! Keep it up!

That's great it is. I do hope you enjoy it along the way during your free time.

There are different species of Vampires. Depending on when they were born, there are Elders known as the first generations, but over the Elders, are the first generation Headmasters. All other generations aren't considered Elders. Younger Headmasters are still Headmasters, but they're weaker compared to first generations. In this novel, Ch 66 and Ch 67 will answer some of your wonderment about the ML's family history if you read that far into it. The first novel called Time Gap Queen and the Apex Predators explains the ML's family bloodline. Also, the first explained it. If you look through the reference chapters you can glance at it and the "Author’s Message" will tell you which chapters to read. Or you can just read along because this novel will go more in-depth with explaining everything for both new and older readers.

This certainly took a darker side. I'm fully hooked! I can't wait for more.

Oh, wow! I did not see that coming 🥺

Very addictive to read. It keeps you on the edge of wanting to know what will happen next. So far, the development of the story is coming out nicely, and the background is done well. Each character is developed as an individual. Right away, the Fl is showing her strength, yet her fear is nicely blended into her reactions, which keeps her seen as a likable character. She's a perfect blend of not-to-strong or weak, which will hopefully give the readers time to see her growth.

The beginning of this novel is very heartwarming when the Fl goes through her family background. Then, once the system comes into play, the novel takes you on an edge, and things start to get interesting. The creation of the world is very creative. You can get a nice visual through the character's eyes, which makes it more engaging for the readers.

For three chapters in, this novel is at a good start for the world-building. Your description in the background is coming out well structured. Do keep up the good work!

Thank you so much. I'm so glad you find each character fun. They each have their own personalities. Rome is one of my favorites.

I love your writing style. Your words are very creative and well-crafted with the way you use them. I truly love the suspense and thrill you get as you read, which has me hooked. Each chapter has its own pace and more details unfold as you read along.

Thank you. My description of it is like a touch of Twilight and a hint of darkness like the underworld, but the storyline goes on a whole new a different level from those stories. There are many more elements to the storyline.

Very nice novel. I like how you introduced the characters with a relatable approach that most readers can see in a daily routine of life. The way you describe what the characters are doing is nearly flawless. So far, the development is coming along smoothly. I can't wait to read more and see what other ideas you come up with since it's only getting started.

So far, it felt like I was in the hunt.

Thank you. I look forward to hearing what you fully think of the novel. The first novel can be used as a reference.

This story is a good one. I love the creative writing style you have with putting your words together. The development for the first two chapters gets you on the edge of the hunt. It's a keeper for me, and I can't wait to read more.