Review Detail of Mfer in Infinite Paths: The Raging Phoenix

A very promising webnovel! The story is going good so far but just to point out few things that can perhaps enhance the reader’s experience. I’ve noticed spelling errors, confusing grammatical structures, and some smaller details that were mentioned from the early chapters seems to be forgotten by author-san like the inspection skill that mc received on early chapter but later mentioned that he needs a skill akin to it? Then there’s the weird path development too, for example, wouldn’t it make more sense if the fighter/brawler path started as it is? Then progress to Battle Master? The word “master” implies mc has mastered this path so shouldn’t it be the last ascension or at least second to the last then ascend its rank to higher realm? 🤔 I really do hope you put extra love and attention to the details of your work author-san cuz I believe this novel is going to be one of the best out novels there 🙂 please keep up the good work and looking forward to your work’s development!